Thursday, April 30, 2009

Moving chunks around

This is still very rough. I haven't done anything about citing. As a matter of fact, I've cut some out. What I have done is to reorder it and do some more editing. I know that I need to go back and connect and cite correctly.

However, what do you think of the order? Do you like it? What could I do to make it better? I think I'd like to insert some footage from NCow. Possibly students talking about writing. How hard it is. how they do it. Their process. What writing means to them.

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